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Ever read a book bursting with so much description you feel as though you are in the book? Now you can. Enter the soon to be-come wild world of a sock, which can’t go to adventure but has to have adventure come to it. When Martha drops her sock, its boring life turns over a new leaf and adventure is soon to come. Shikib Mehri uses great description and word choice in his amazing new, great for all ages creation, “The Sock.” This 8 page picture book was published in March 2009 in Vancouver by Shikib Rules publishing co.